Saturday, July 10, 2010

but nobody heard me.


Mind spinning
thoughts 
problems
solutions 
illusions
all fused into one

i took a walk
to clear my skies
and i walked
and i walked
with my friend 
but alone in my heart
i remained

and i walked 
and i walked
until my feet stopped
and for a second
the whole world stood still

and i panicked
and i panicked
it was too surreal
help me i screamed
but nobody heard me

then it got hot
then it got hot
sweat began to 
drip from my forehead
help me i screamed
but my lips weren't moving

I started to pant
lungs winded
heart beat quickened
legs weakened
I got dizzy
I got dizzy
my mind was leaving me

and the world moved faster
the world moved faster
no air left to breathe
I collapsed to the ground
HELP ME I screamed
but it was to late, 
anxiety had defeated me
...once again

4 comments:

Punk Chopsticks said...

Nice!!! This sounds just like a panic attack

Anonymous said...

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May I use some of the information from this blog post right above if I give a backlink back to this site?

Thanks,
Oliver

Miss Jaimie said...

Sure. Just let me know where your posting it.

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